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Last Night XX opinion pls XX by ~chrissie-ness:iconchrissie-ness:



Last night, didn't we have fun together?
Last night, we did have fun.
Baby, don't we have a lot of secrets?
Honey, we should tell.

*chorus
But, this is our first,
We could've shout out to the world!
Too scared to tell, but it doesn't really matter right now,
Maybe, we can cherish this for a while.

*not done yet XD*
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maybe i should just ask you guys if this is ok? like the lyrics? =P and stuff..lolz XD

i need opinions, please? XD thank you! =)

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:iconfresh-eye-candy:
I like it a lot.

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:iconchrissie-ness:
why thank you :XD: i wish i can keep writing and still make it real good...yeah =P

thank you so much! it gives me more courage to keep working on it...and i'm really turning it into a song. =P

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Metro station - Seventeen Forever

We're one mistake from being together
But let's not ask why it's not right
You won't be seventeen forever
And we can get away with this tonight

i love you.
:iconfresh-eye-candy:
Awesome! It sounds really good so far. I really hope you finish it. Even if you don't put the finished version up, note me it.

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:iconchrissie-ness:
ok -^^- =P i will :XD:

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Metro station - Seventeen Forever

We're one mistake from being together
But let's not ask why it's not right
You won't be seventeen forever
And we can get away with this tonight

i love you.
:iconchrissie-ness:
thanks so much btw =P i like it too :XD: and i hope the person that i wrote this for likes it too =P

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Metro station - Seventeen Forever

We're one mistake from being together
But let's not ask why it's not right
You won't be seventeen forever
And we can get away with this tonight

i love you.
:iconwhenthemooncriedout:
It makes my heart skip beats every minute XD hahaha. finish it so i could finally rest in peace XD kidding. the song's very touchy. haha. memories. :( awwwww finish it.O_O lol

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:iconchrissie-ness:
lolz :XD: okay i will -^^- thank you so much :XD: that really means a lot to me :XD:

now i know i should REALLY finish this :XD:

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check out my cupcakes! :XD:

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Metro station - Seventeen Forever

We're one mistake from being together
But let's not ask why it's not right
You won't be seventeen forever
And we can get away with this tonight

i love you.
:iconfresh-eye-candy:
Me too.

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Check out my cakes -> [link]

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